I am very sorry to hear the sad news From TV that super torrential rain hits Seoul Is everything okay? I hope you and everyone in yourside are okay If there is anything I can do to help, please don’t hesitate to let me know
妈妈可以建议修改喔
谢谢
I am very sorry to hear the sad news From TV that super torrential rain hits Seoul Is everything okay? I hope you and everyone in yourside are okay If there is anything I can do to help, please don’t hesitate to let me know
妈妈可以建议修改喔
谢谢
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I am turely sorry when I've heard the news From TV that Heavy rains hits Seoul
Is there everything okay with you?
I hope you and your family is fine
let me know if you need any help
1 I am TRULY sorry
2 heavy rain had HIT Seoul
3 I hope you and your family ARE fine
我也来参一咖 （英文不算好）
I am very sorrty to hear the sad news From TV that
==> I am very sorry to hear that the (中间的 the sad news from TV 有点累赘 unless, TV is a big part in your relationship)
Again, Is everything okay ? I hope you and every
==> 有点累赘 I hope you and your family are fine
If there is anything I can help, please don't hesitate to let me know
(原作者于 2011-08-01 04:10:02 重新编辑过)
写得很好不用改
版妈写的OK啊
只是有些许的文法需要修改
但以朋友间口语化的对话来说
真的是无伤大雅啦
I am very sorry to hear the sad news from TV ABOUT THE super torrential rain THAT HIT Seoul Is everything okay? I hope you and everyone ON yourside are okay If there is anything I can do to help, please don’t hesitate to let me know
I am very sorry to hear about the damage caused by the heavy rain in Seoul Is everything alright? I hope everyone in your family is doing well If there is anything that I can do, please do not hesitate to let me know
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